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3 Copywriting tips you can use Immediately
Happy Thursday Mf
No bullshit in this one…
Just 3 things you can use in your copy to make it instantly better
Ready?
Relate everything to reader
Dont say shit like:
“The craziest thing just happened to me and will change my entire life”
Say:
“The craziest thing just happened to me that you might be able to relate to, and if not its for sure going to help you”.
Say “Because”.
No one believes you when you make statements unless there is a REASON for the statement.
Dont say:
“Doing cardio to lose weight is a waste of time”
Say:
“Doing cardio to lose weight is a waste of time, because your likely just burning off the fuel in your body instead of the fat. Here’s a better way instead”.
Start short, get longer (Not in a gay way)
Copy is as much as what you say, as it is how it looks on the page.
If people are reading your copy and its a big fat bulk of fucking text on the page…
They ain’t reading it.
Dont:
Dear reader, in this email im going to be showing you the number one best way to lose fat like you could never imagine. And no, before you ask this isn’t some gimmick or the usual nonsense like “Eat less and exercise more”.
Do:
Dear reader,
in this email
i’m going to be showing you the number one best way to lose fat like you could never imagine.
And no,
before you ask
This isn’t some gimmick or the usual nonsense like
“Eat less and exercise more”.
Easy shit you can implement today. Try it.
Get after it.
Tom Stoic